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Pink Comparism

Published: Sep 29, 2012

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Here is another entry for the 'Draw this Again Challenge'. I used to love the old piece that I drew in spring of 2011 but I also realized that it was full of anatomy etc. flaws. That's why I decided to draw it again for this challenge to see how much I've improved over the past one and a half years. c: I drew the old piece with polychromos color pencils and copic markers for the vase details, and the new version with polychromos color pencils only.

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F0ggi

Oct 19, 2012

_{I really like your improvement in your drawing.

For starters, I really like how you draw her hair with the details to make the strands to bring out to your work.

The face anatomy really look amazing; it looks accurate overall, I like how you make the whole face from her eyes to her mouth to have a great proportion to make them look believable.

The way you draw the pot with the hearts looks really great with the beautiful designs and the hearts have some great dimension as well.

I really love the shading overall, there's a different tones that indicate the shadows and the highlights. I like how you did the folds on her clothes, it make them look realistic and believable as well.

Also, you really did good with the body anatomy; the anatomy that you draw really look natural with the pose which give expression. I like how you apply some details with her hands and the rest of her body just look so relax. However, there's is the only thing that could be improve; like her neck is seems to be a little too long so to improve them is to make them a little short so her neck looks natural as well.

You really improve your work and challenge yourself which I really love. If you want to learn more about the anatomy in general, here some resources
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You seriously did an amazing job on your drawing, keep on the artiful work.}